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Alone once more,
rain falls like sweetest sorrow,
painfull yet breathing new life,
memorys fade like the colours of a leaf,
always remaining but changed into something new,
people laugh and try to ignore the screams,
wind carries whispers and the words remain,
like the sea apon the stone,
touching, moving, forever leaves its mark,
does anyone remember,
is the sea to alike the sky,
here i stand looking on, waiting for change,
and fade away like a shadow into the night.
©2008-2009 ~yin-teng
:iconyin-teng:

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i small poem i wrote when i was feeling sad.

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:iconmatt-dg1:
Oooooh,
deep...
very, sorrowful and depressing
+ i like how the natural connotations consist throughout the poem
definately one of, if not the best of your gallery
:iconyin-teng:
Thank you for the comment, it's greatly appriciated ^_^.. I haven't logged on in awhile but am about to post some new poems I wrote this week, let me know what you think.. they're kinda happy this time :p
:iconmatt-dg1:
oh goodgood
glad to see (...read?) you in a good mood :D

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